the edges, another stream of conciousness thing.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Monday, 21-Jul-2008 16:32:11

I wrote this a little while ago, enjoy.

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The Edges.

Embers of memory fade like mountain top echos. Once, there were two minute friendships and five minute fights. Then, there were five minute friendships and two minute fights, or so it seemed. The minutes turned to years, in the blink of an eye, and before you knew it, friends were drifting, like seeds on the breeze. Those five minute friendships shifted and changed, until they were simply links in the chain that shaped us. Suddenly, those two minute fight smelted away, like icecubes in the drink of life. A faint taste, around the edges, a faint trace, around the edges, a forever mark, around the edges, is all that remains.

Post 2 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Monday, 21-Jul-2008 22:21:30

I like the first line "Embers of memory fade like mountain top echos"and the Ice cube one Very good I loved it I like it I want some more of it lol Ok I need to stop listening to country music. Great job girly

Post 3 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 22-Jul-2008 0:32:00

awe, thank you, Maria

Post 4 by Resonant (Find me alive.) on Tuesday, 22-Jul-2008 6:24:11

A faint taste, around the edges. A faint trace, around the edges. A forever mark, around the edges.

That's just cooooool!
Also sad. I like.

Post 5 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 22-Jul-2008 10:42:25

Thank you, Erin!